A few months ago I subscribed to Harlequin Super Romances, April was my first shippment. HS-1194 FATHER BY CHOICE by M.J. Rodgers, HS-1195 A FAMILY OF HER OWN by Brenda Novak, HS-1198 JOHN RILEY's GIRL by Inglath Cooper, & HS-1199 FOR THE SAKE OF HIS CHILD by Bonnie K. Winn. I've read two so far.
FATHER BY CHOICE (Rated C-)
M.J. Rodgers
4/2004
Rom/C HS-1194
Emily Barrett wants a baby in her life --- not a husband.
And that's the reason she went to a sperm bank. Through some detective work she's able to work out who the donor is, but she doesn't ever plan to reveal to Dr. Brad Winslow that he's about to become a father.
Yet when the two are forced to work together to solve a century-old mystery with a modern-day twist, Emily begins to wonder if she should revise her life plan.
***Thoughts
The story starts out just fine, but then the author put so many secondary characters in both the present and past I lost count about half way. Emily and Brad got lost in between hunting for the lost time capsule, the 100 year old body found with the time capsule, and other towns people's family present and past history.
The story is set up with an artificial inseminated baby, Brad's donated sperm. He donated to help pay off raising student loans from medical school. Emily wanted a baby and Brad's profile was the best. When Emily is taken to the ER after fainting (where Dr. Brad Winslow works) she repeats his profile while semiconscious after she hears him say his name. Brad wants to know how she knows so many private details about him. He figures out she is carrying his child and she is single, now he wants in his child's life.
Add in a 100 year old time capsule to be opened, finding a body next to it, then it is stolen. As Emily and Brad try to unravel the identify of the body, who and why someone stole the contains of the capsule, I lost that loving feeling....was there any loving feels, nope romance flew out the window when someone climbed through to steal the time capsule.
I ended up skimming the last 6 chapters, even though in the next chapter they were to make love, I was already wanting the book to end.
This is the first book in the Code Red series, I am hoping it gets better and it should because the third book's author is Kathryn Shay, second is Kay David, another favorite of mine.
The second book in April is much better:
FOR THE SAKE OF HIS CHILD (Rated B+)
Bonnie K. Winn
4/2004
Rom/C HS-1199
After tragedy deprives her of the two people she loves most, Brynn Alder decides to leave her old life behind and start over in Texas Hill Country.
Here she'll help troubled kids get their lives in order -- it's the only way she can make sense of everything that's happened to her. But she knows that she'll be able to help only if she doesn't get emotionally involved. Of course, that's before she meets Jake McKenzie and his daughter, Andrea.
Jake wants to be a good father, but he needs Brynn's help. And when circumstances force him to stay at the isolated ranch with Brynn and Andrea, emotions build and refuse to be denied.
***Thoughts
This books starts out with Brynn's husband knowing he is in trouble and should have called the police yesterday....he is then run off the road. Next opens with Brynn out in the Texas hill country. Which by the way is very beautiful and accurately described by the author.
Brynn helps trouble teenagers away from parents, peers, modern day toys, and life's pressures. We know at the beginning Brynn has a daughter but we have to get into the story a bit to find out what has happened.
Brynn has just worked with a very difficult teenager and is ready for a long rest between patients. Jake comes knocking at her door, which puts Brynn into a panic because she is hiding in the hill country and no one is suppose to know her whereabouts.
Jake's daughter, Andrea is slowly dying and Jake doesn't take no for answer when Brynn tells him she can't take his daughter now, maybe later. Andrea's parents didn't have a marriage, her mother had no maternal instincts and her dad was always out of the country on business. When her mother is killed Andrea stops eating. Now Jake needs Brynn's help.
The story is interesting as Brynn brings Andrea out of her shell and teaches Jake how to be a father. But there are some man guys out there after Brynn or something she has so Jake goes into protective mode.
The book never drags, carries the reader swiftly from page 1 to page 298 in a blink of an eye.
So I am half way.....one very good and one not so good.